Hi Pez,
I like that the track smacks you in the face; This is me... this is what I like... this is how I do it. How music should be done, whatever genre you prefer. I like this kind of music so it suited me just fine. Raw energy.
I liked the snare to be honest, thought it cut through. Perhaps you could go for a tighter sound to it; Maybe Joy Division type sound - don't know if it would work.
Liked the bit of fuzz. Really good vocal.
Ending? Album outro!
Cheers,
Digger