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« on: September 03, 2012, 02:06:10 PM »




i will grow like a flower in the dessert
i will take less than i give
i will give my light to the sun
i will break what i can`t control
i will divide i will multiply
i will live and i will die
i will climb all the tops of mountains
i will touch your sky.

and when i fall to earth. let me lie..

i will bring you back from dead
i will place a crown of stars, upon your head
i will take your place and stand my ground
i will smother flames and make no sound
i will take it all ,for the greatest gain
i will gather clouds and steal the rain
i will never ask you why
i will touch your sky

and when i fall to earth,,just let me lie.


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« Reply #1 on: September 05, 2012, 07:09:16 AM »
short, simple and interesting lyrics

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« Reply #2 on: September 05, 2012, 09:56:43 AM »
short, simple and interesting lyrics

wait a couple of days and you might hear it come to life! ;)

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« Reply #3 on: September 20, 2012, 12:40:13 AM »
Short, simple and interesting, but arguably a poem.

Is there an anti-chorus movement here that I've not picked up on?

I guess, given that you have ideas for a melody, it is a song but it seems very short...
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« Reply #4 on: September 20, 2012, 08:11:37 AM »
Short, simple and interesting, but arguably a poem.

Is there an anti-chorus movement here that I've not picked up on?

I guess, given that you have ideas for a melody, it is a song but it seems very short...

I thought it was a poem of sorts..but check out `touch your sky`in reviews ..KAFLA made it into a song.