"Waiting for you"

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Chanson

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« on: August 30, 2012, 07:07:34 AM »
This is Sam from India. This is my first song and I hope you people like it. Your valuable comments and suggestions are welcome. Please share your feedback with me.

“Waiting for you”                     

Verse 1
When I was walking by the banks of a silent river
I saw your shadow dancing on the water
When I saw you and tried to reach you, you were not there
And when I tried to kiss you, you were gone with the ripples in the water

Chorus
You are my sunshine
You are my moonlight
You are my summer
You are my winter

Verse 2
I want to be close with you
I hope you feel the same with me
I want to hold hands while walking with you
I still hope you feel the same with me

Baby come to me
Baby come with me

Chorus
You are my heart of roses
You are the pages of my favorite book
You are the star of my sky of love
You are my love

Come to me baby
Come to me baby
Come to me…
Come to me…
Come…


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« Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 06:05:25 PM »
Bit short,a bit simple.but poetic.. ;)

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« Reply #2 on: August 30, 2012, 08:08:42 PM »
This is my first song. I tried to write one myself. So, a bit short. It took very less time to write me. I should write lengthy and with more content.

Thank you for your feedback  :)