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Let's Live Our Lives
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Let's Live Our Lives
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evanjavo
Open Mic
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Just passing through.
Let's Live Our Lives
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August 24, 2012, 09:17:13 PM »
Here's just a silly song about living life, hence the name.
I actually have music to this one, just on the acoustic. I might upload later, we'll see...
Enjoy!
Keep on a steady beat
Don't lose the rhythm in your feet
Open up the world outside
And put your mind away
I have to say you're such a treat
You're the one that makes this sweet
Reality is hard to find
But that'll be okay
So let's live our lives
Let's live them out day and night
And watch the sun set and rise
Let's live our lives
So let's live our lives
Let's live them out until we die
And forget the things that make us cry
Let's live our lives
Let's live our lives
Well I don't care what they think
Go lose yourself to fun and things
There's nothing more that meets the eye
Besides a brighter day
I have to say you're so unique
You're priceless as the top antique
Reality is hard to find
But that's the price we pay
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Stroller2010
Busker
Posts: 98
Re: Let's Live Our Lives
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August 27, 2012, 05:54:53 PM »
I always like it when I can sing along to a song easily without hearing the music like I can with this. It's good, would like to hear the music.
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flossie
Platinum Album
Posts: 745
Re: Let's Live Our Lives
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September 24, 2012, 04:12:27 PM »
I reckon with the right music this would easily sell well commercially, ads films etc particularly the chorus, maybe strengthen up the verses, I am cliche queen
although you don't want to lose the pop quality of these lyrics ..maybe a little tweak?
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