[FallingForever45]

Out of the darkness
Don’t let me die
Out of your sight
Just let me cry

How could you be so blind?
As I bleed
Right in front of your eyes

You don’t want to believe
You refuse to recieve
Everything that’s here
Right in front of you

My hopeless pain
Is your biggest shame
I’m sorry that you don’t care for me like I did for you

I understand
You hate to see
Me not okay
In the dark

But hide the light
From me
As I leave you tonight

You don’t want to believe
You refuce to recieve
Everything that’s here

Right in front of you
My hopeless pain
Is your biggest shame
I’m sorry that you don’t care for me like I did for you

I don’t care anymore
If you ignore my struggles
It’s a fact that

Only God can save me now
As I’m falling more and more
The pain it grows insde of me
As I die the final time

You don’t want to believe
You refuse to recieve
Everything that’s here
Right in front of you

My hopeless pain
Is your biggest shame
I’m sorry that you don’t care for me like I did for you

Your blindness
Is my biggest mess
I’m sorry that you don’t care for me like I did for you

[S.T.C]

Quite good..do`nt all make perfect sense...but thats not a big problem...they read as melodic to me.

[Stroller2010]

Not bad this. Some good single lines in there, but a couple may need a little polishing. "But hide the light from me as I leave you tonight" may be an example, but overall, this is quite good.