So my friend wrote some lyrics and asked me to write a song around them, and this is how it came out. Please take a listen and tell me what you think. Thanks!
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=11115100&q=hi&newref=1In the beginning, oh it was so much fun
And of course I'd like more
But not this particular one
Cause want the time for living
And I need the time for peace
And I'd love the time to know her
But she's pushing up the degrees
I can't hold her
I can't hold on
No it didn't take long for her to say
That I was it
She'd simply say "I'm ready, I'm ready"
But I don't think we're a fit
Cause I just learned to be with someone
And in this short time, closeness feels crazy
And I'd love the time to know her but
She says my love is lazy
I can't hold her
I can't hold on
She says now she hates me
I try to touch her, she starts to blame
I want to go back to the beginning
When we had fun together
But I know that's impossible
So I'll work to break our tether
If I can understand her and she can accept me
Then maybe we can live for peace together
Though until then, I'll want to, I'll want to
But I can't hold her