Male teenager needing lyrics for a song

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dansweetoffic

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« on: August 08, 2012, 09:11:02 PM »
My name is Daniel Sweet, I am 16 and I am a singer. I am currently experiencing a lot of hate on my twitter profile - @dansweetoffic and I am looking to have an original song called F*ck The Haters. Of course, due to the title, it will be explicit in terms of language. The only time I want the song to swear is when it is saying "F*ck the haters."

I'd like the song to be roughly three minutes long, with one verse, chorus, another verse, chorus, mini verse, chorus.
Some things to consider including

The names they've called me - "Fake", "Freak", "Untalented",

Facts about the haters - Jealous, sad, lonely, pathetic,

If you are willing to write this song, please email the lyrics to danielsweetpublic@outlook.com

Looking forward to hearing your lyrics!

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« Reply #1 on: August 09, 2012, 12:42:47 AM »
First of all, wrong section. This should probably go under Collaborations. The lyrics board is for posting lyrics.
Secondly, why should I write lyrics for you? You need to sell it to us.
Third, What do we get in return?
Last, Who normally writes your lyrics and why are you coming here for lyrics?

You haven't posted anything else. We know nothing of your personality or anything of decent detail about you yet you want us to sit down and put the time into writing you a song when you haven't put the time into contributing to this forum.
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« Reply #2 on: August 09, 2012, 12:43:51 AM »
Hello Dan,

Inspired by your message.  Here's my suggestion (PS, it's very hard to make something rhyme with 'Fuck the Haters'):

Fuck the Haters

1.
Had my fill, I’ve had enough
Wonder what I was ever thinking of
Seems this world’s all out of love
They call me Freak, they call me Fake
Hitting on every move I make
Some people are so full of hate

Chorus
Did somebody hurt you when you were young?
Do you wanna take it out on everyone?
It’s easy from the comfort of your home
Try to make me take your words to heart
It’s easy when you got a running start
Talking so big from so afar

2.
Kill my dreams, that’s what they want
They call me every name under the sun
This is their idea of fun
I’ll write, a symphony
Dedicate it to my enemies
To all those who got it in for me

Chorus
Did somebody hurt you when you were young?
Do you wanna take it out on everyone?
It’s easy from the comfort of your home
Try to make me take your words to heart
It’s easy when you got a running start
Talking so big from so afar

Middle 8
One day
You’ll be singing my song
You’re gonna sing along now
Yeah, you’re gonna sing along now

You know who you are
This one’s for you
You’re gonna sing along now
Yeah, you’re gonna sing along now

Fuck the Haters
Fuck the Haters
Fuck the Haters
Fuck the Haters

Chorus
Did somebody hurt you when you were young?
Do you wanna take it out on everyone?
It’s easy from the comfort of your home
Try to make me take your words to heart
It’s easy when you got a running start
Talking so big from so afar

I'm thinking that 'Fuck the Haters' could continue to be chanted over the final chorus


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« Reply #3 on: August 09, 2012, 06:03:14 AM »
you're annoyed at people calling you fake so you're going to have someone else right your lyrics for you. right.
« Last Edit: August 09, 2012, 09:16:08 AM by Jack Simmons »
"Die young in the dark, that's poetry."

http://soundcloud.com/the_streetcars/tracks

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« Reply #4 on: August 09, 2012, 08:41:55 AM »
you're annoyed at people calling you fake so you're going to have someone else right your lyrics for you. right.

Outstanding!


On another note, I think Dead Weight has done the near-impossible. He's taken the list of cliches you handed us and made something that is damn good IMO. It really explores the specifics of it all and doesn't just talk about 'they said, they said, they said, bashing haters, bashing haters, bashing haters'. Excellent work, Dead Weight. I reckon you should hold on to that and use it for your own stuff...
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Jack Simmons

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« Reply #5 on: August 09, 2012, 09:16:46 AM »
you're annoyed at people calling you fake so you're going to have someone else right your lyrics for you. right.

Outstanding!

if only i'd fucking written it properly. fuuuuuuuucking whisky.
"Die young in the dark, that's poetry."

http://soundcloud.com/the_streetcars/tracks