[vibesville]

Link to airplay at the end of post

OK went back to the drawing board a little on this although I need to re record the vocals. I kinda like where it's going now though.

Anyway feedback as always, much appreciated

Gone - http://soundcloud.com/kirbyhowarth/gone

Gone

I want to keep your love inside my heart
I wanna take your hand so we can talk
about the love we've always shared
It's a love that shows we care
I want to live inside your world
and if I leave I would surely fall
But I could fall for no one less
It's your love that I caress

Please please, please don't go
I'd give my life to have you close
laying here I think of you
and the love we never knew

I want to take the tears that you have cried
put them in a place that you can't find
so everyday you'll wake and smile
and feel a love that's so worth while
I'll take the pain out of your day
So you'll always want to stay
in these arms that keep you warm
with a love that rides the storm

Please please, please don't go
Don't leave me here alone
I can't bare the thought your gone

[nooms]

hi kirby
lovely piano
beautiful song, emotional vocal
think youd be right about a female voice, it would work really well,
dont think you should do much to it other than that
very radio friendly again
fine work

[Binladeda]

Beautiful, beautiful song...I'm on my knees ......Why aren't you famous ?? 

[vibesville]

Beautiful, beautiful song...I'm on my knees ;D......Why aren't you famous ?? 

I'm not lucky enough Mr B :) Thank you

[bewarethisboy]

the thing I love about your stuff (actually I love everything about you stuff) is I that it would be great in so many different arrangements. I love this as it is. Bon Jovi could make a rock anthem out of it - and it would be bloody lovely as an emotional modern folk song. This is top notch. Top quality song writing. Top quality performance too. Love it to bits. BTB

[vibesville]

the thing I love about your stuff (actually I love everything about you stuff) is I that it would be great in so many different arrangements. I love this as it is. Bon Jovi could make a rock anthem out of it - and it would be bloody lovely as an emotional modern folk song. This is top notch. Top quality song writing. Top quality performance too. Love it to bits. BTB

Your to kind BTB! Thank you it's much appreciated :)

[montydog]

Lovely vocals, nice piano playing and the sort of top notch song writing that I've come to expect from you. It's beyond criticism. I hate you 

[vibesville]

Lovely vocals, nice piano playing and the sort of top notch song writing that I've come to expect from you. It's beyond criticism. I hate you  :'(

Haha... not to much I hope MD ;)

[andy5544]

Short n sweet vibes me ol'bean , lovely tune , as someone else said you could make this in any style you wanted , loved it , very touching.

[UnknownLegend]

I'm jealous

That is superb

[man of simple pleasures]

best tune i've heard like from you, deep, emotional, dig the piano aswell, great song! this kinda stuff should be top of pops!

[Jack Simmons]

Short and sweet. I like that the lyrics are simple but go straight for the heart, and your voice compliments them nicely. You have one of those voices that really adds to the melody and lyrics just through sheer tone, I love the slight croaks and cracks that gives it the emotion. If you do go for a female singer for the chorus, make sure it's a backing vocal and and that it doesn't overpower your vocals too much - someone with a full but soft, folky sound would do nicely. Don't Celine Dion. Sweet songwriting.

[vibesville]

Wow! big thanks to you all for the great comments, I'm blown away. I really, really do appreciate it... thank you :)

[vibesville]

P.S. I've now added the lyrics if anyone want's to have a look

[ABeautifulVirus]

this song is a gem. captures an essence of Coldplay but with your own unique panache. A+