Sad Marianne Updated (Final Version)

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« Reply #15 on: August 12, 2012, 12:01:16 PM »
Hi Montydog,

good lyrics, good song! It has a sad atmosphere but also like you are very at peace with it all


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« Reply #16 on: September 28, 2012, 06:23:19 PM »
 
Update: I've re-recorded this following advice from forum members. It's now shorter, sung in a higher key and I've added a little simple cello part. I'd love to get some feedback to see if I've improved it or not.

Final Version: http://soundcloud.com/alan-walker-4/sad-marianne-final-version
« Last Edit: September 28, 2012, 07:04:24 PM by montydog »

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« Reply #17 on: October 27, 2012, 08:35:20 PM »
This is lovely song but not my kind of stuff ... sorry. The song could be shorter , I lost my interest in the middle of the song. You have good voice.

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« Reply #18 on: October 27, 2012, 10:23:03 PM »
I love it Monty, love the mix in tempo. Puts me in mind of driving a long stretch of open road. Great storytelling, not unlike Simon and Garfunkel as I think someone else has mentioned.

All in all a beautiful song to my ear.