Songwriter Forum > Lyrics

My first song - Any good changes?

(1/1)

Nickericson1995:
So I have been going on with a song lately, but the lyrics hasn't turned out as I expected.
The song is based on the irish folk genre, and describes a mans love to the country of Ireland :)

But I don't know how to write the lyrics, I have tried a lot. I have made the melody and the music, but i still need to make the lyrics.
If some of you guys wanna help me out, contact me or leave me a message, then we could find out some lyrics stuff!  ;)
Later I will post the lyrics I have already, so you can see it and give me a little feedback if you want. My imagine is that it will consist of 4 verses and two different choruses, when its finished.

Here it is so far:

Verse 1:

Taste the sand with your feet
feel the ocean with your eyes
I was wandering up the celtic shore
when I saw you

Verse 2:

I came from a foreign place
pretty far to the east
God granted me this graceful pearl
this beautiful isle

Chorus:

When the battle drums sing,
and the ocean is raising
let your dreams hear my rhymes
the ballads of the times
And follow the tides that travels along


Take a look at it
Cheers Guys!

Navigation

[0] Message Index