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The Selective Wreck

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Sellon

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« on: July 14, 2012, 02:50:16 AM »
Pretty cliche. yeah. thought I'd write something different for once...I guess?

''We all lose people in our lives, some people leave a big impression on others, I think for you, big isn't the right word, massive maybe, it's hard to describe, because for the first time in my life I cared, and now you're gone, well....I guess that's life, huh?...Maybe I'll see you again soon. I hope.''

You can keep everything that I ever gave you
The songs and the clothes
I hope one day they save you
Knowing that someone out there still cares for you
I wish I could feel the same way
I want you to know that you'll never be alone
I will always be here
Even when things become unclear

With boxes and files
I'll be on my way
With pictures in piles
I'm leaving today
I hope you think of me often
Cause I think of you every day....

Sometimes I wonder about when you left
What shape the hole in my life really is
I know you thought you were doing what's best
But waking up next to you is something I really miss
You gave me something I could never replace
You gave me memories that I could never erase...

I move my things to my new apartment
I never really thought this is what being apart meant
I never knew that my world would end with you
You left me in a wreck of photographs and memories
That stuck in my mind even after we were through
I hope that you remember me...
I hope you never forget
I still remember the day that we met...

With boxes and files
I'll be on my way
With pictures in piles
I'm leaving today
I hope you think of me often
Cause I think of you every day....

Sometimes I wonder about when you left
What shape the hole in my life really is
I know you thought you were doing what's best
But waking up next to you is something I really miss
You gave me something I could never replace
You gave me memories that I could never erase...
What if we both just smiled at once?

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« Reply #1 on: July 15, 2012, 12:36:31 AM »
I don`t know if this is good piece of writing or not....but i like the title..and i like this verse/chorus.


With boxes and files
I'll be on my way
With pictures in piles
I'm leaving today
I hope you think of me often
Cause I think of you every day....

Dead Weight

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« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2012, 12:49:18 AM »
'Pictures in piles' is a killer line.

For those who have been there, that's twisting the knife...