Tight playing, great vocal projection, interesting chord movements and I like the way the title appears at the end of each section. I like the modern referencing lyrics "Solid state/obsolete technologies"
My main issue here is that this is exhausting to my ears. 6 minutes and all at one level. It isn't over compressed at all, its just played at one level throughout. Granted much of this is my preference for dark and light in my music, but even heavy music plays with contrasts.
"Nevermind" by Nirvana is the classic loud/quiet album. Grunge needed it, of course, as the main components were so very basic, but in any case it shows the magic of contrast. This song does the opposite. The drummer plays full whack throughout, the guitars chug along unrelentlessly. And when the lead lines appear there force there way into the soundscape rather than having other guitars drop to give them space. All of this is likely done on purpose though...
I'll repeat; this is to my ears. Some people will love the balls out rock thing, but for me it distracted from what is a great song melodically and lyrically. A softer sections here and there with a changing drum pattern, letting the vocal breathe, would maybe have kept my attention for the full 6 minutes. As it stands I drifted off in a see of power chords and splashy brassware after the first 3. But maybe that's what you wanted me to do
