Hi Peoples.
I wrote this today,
bit of a heavy period so I'm a little weary putting this up publicly.
but..
I feel its one of the better songs I've managed to get out, but elements feel shaky to me and before I went the whole 9 yards to get a decent recording I thought impute could help me polish the edges
so let me steal 4.22 of your life to share your feelings on mine
http://soundcloud.com/moving-mountains-1/your-song ((THIS IS THE LINK TO MY SOUNDCLOUD ACCOUNT))
::best listened through headphones::
(lyrics for the middle section will be changed)
(and suggestions on a Name Title would be awesome)
(Lyrics)
V:
I told you that I hate these games
you're tearing me apart all the same
he won't love you like I could
as he lays you down
I hope you feel that too..
I'm sorry that you won't allow the time
to let me make you feel like you were mine
even as I say these words
the pain keeps choking what I want to say
Chorus:
you hold onto
the worst parts of me
I'm living with this everyday
you hold onto
the pieces of the puzzle
we'll never see the picture in full
this is all there seems to be
a love that I should know
but I just want you happy girl..
V2:
You told me that you hate these games
now breathings getting harder with this change
all I wanted was the best for you
to hold the world in my hands for you
I how I predict what you'll say
I wish that I was wrong in every way
even as I say these words
the pain it's killing me with every line
and
If you hold onto
the best/better parts of me
there's a chance that we could prove
The time we spent
falling in love was worth the heartache we went through
is there more we could be
a love that we could feel
but I guess you're happy girl..
(hate this bit- I struggled to feel where to take it here)
But
You broke up with me
He broke up with her
you both found your place
in your own special world
I didn't see it coming
why'd it happen this way
well I guess I'll stay away x3
Chorus 1) outro
