The harp is ace on this, good harmonica player
I find this kind of tempo in heavy guitar rock songs a bit, well, ploddy, but to your credit you do a great job with it. The changes of section are lovely. Drums are tight as hell, great playing all round in fact
I like the filtered vocal on the exit going just out of time
I found your last song to have more of a pull, but this one is more original, and two songs in its clear your band have a range which is ALWAYS promising.
The lyrics have a good character. I like the line Golden sound from every stereo. Simple but effective imagery.
Good stuff overall
(NB<< your mastering/producer guy did an ace job on the last track. On this one however there seems to be digital artefacts on the guitar and some of the heavier vocal lines from, most likely, harsh compression settings; especially if he mastered from a stereo wav file with preset levels from your off desk mix. I find I often have to reduce distorted guitar lines when mastering as the mastering algorithms I employ bring guitar up nicely without "distorting" in the bad way, whereas "at desk level" they square off against the drum, giving this square digital clipping.
Its shame as everything else about the sound is lovely. This might be the raspiness Tina is referring to. Alas it is "bad" sound.
Do check it hasn't appeared during the transition from master to mp3 or mp3 to upload on soundcloud though. If so it might just be a case of changing how you import and/or upload to streaming services. Those pesky variables!!)