But shining armour is not casual wear for me
And it makes me so mad at the world
Mate, fantastic , show stopping line quickly followed by something awful! When you say "so mad" it sounds like you're exagerrating. Like those CalSpeak girls "Did you see what she was wearing it was sooooooo awful". "Furious", "Rant", "Sickened", something more emotionally charged would go a long way.
I climbed the tower
I killed the beast
I like this fairytale "cliche" her. Maybe stud some more around the place? Poisioned apples, enchanted sleep, etc etc. Really trawl Disneys back catalogue for cliched images. I think it would underline this personal fairytale idea, and highlight how petty and self absorbed it can be
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