Hey Peppermint
I think this is a brave subject to write about, so kudos on that
What i liked about it is you haven't gone for the (yawn!) Beyonce angle of "I'm a women and I don't need you" which you can't move for in the charts. It's a song about loving and hating someone and hating yourself for it.
The lack of a "Hollywood" ending was refreshing to me. It makes it real for the listener. Maybe not as satisfying, but I don't think the subject matter would appreciate that
"But tomorrow is the start of another day,
I hope all these feelings will go away,
Because deep down i don't need you,
And deep down i don't miss you."
This verse (?) seemed to jar with overall song. Again, it's got that Hollywood shine to it that the rest of the song doesn't. Maybe you could tweak it, make it more about the womens hopes? But eventually she lets her self down?
Also, like Stokie said, where's the chorus (if there is one)?
Peter