Hi everyone,
Here is a short song that i've written,
I've tried to take on board what people have said about my songs.
Alot of you say i rhyme to much so i have tried to not rhyme to often and still make sure that the song makes sense.
So it might not be to great as i'm stepping into new territory when writing songs that don't rhyme so much.
I have to say i didn't feel comfortable writting it without having a rhyme all the way through the lyrics.
But hopefully its a step in the right direction anyway let me know what you think.
Remember
The words that i said,
While lying in my bed,
Are the words that you must remember,
Im not made of money,
And my hearts not made of stone,
And thats the things that you should remember,
If you don't want me,
Then i'll show you the door,
Its not like we haven't been in this situation before,
If only you could remember.
Then you walk out into the night,
Saying you'll be alright,
Until you walk to somewhere you can't remember.
Remember what i say,
And then well be ok,
Next time that you need to remember.