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dimallthelights:
I could lost control again if you wanted to
We could fall into our hole again if you asked me to
we were always better killing one another

So shoot at me before i'm drawn and let me run upstairs to be sick in love
when torments no longer a chore and seeing you in pains enough
only a fool on the floor could see adoration as a substitute for trust
But its enough


NOT FINISHED YET!

The Corsair:

--- Quote from: dimallthelights on May 01, 2012, 12:05:08 AM ---

NOT FINISHED YET!

--- End quote ---

In that case, please take the time to finish it before posting. We're not the sort to help on a half-worked piece because then the finished piece ends up being the product of our ideas and not yours.

I'm sure you must have some finished work you'd want reviewed :)
Also, it would be nice for you to post some reviews on other members' work (which will also ensure you get reviews posted on your own work).

We're here to help, trust me

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