[stokie63]

You have no shame you feel the pain
Scarred by the past and your dreams dont last
Broken by your fall
Afraid of the spirits that call
Ghosts you cant see
No self respect your no good for me

Little does she know
My minds made up to go
She would do the same
If they were rules to the game
I hide my face in shame
Neele has gone damage is done
No need to cry out the bitches name

The lover you have is a bitch
The lover you have is a bitch

Troubled by your past
And then daylight comes
Dont hide behind the mask
Inside what can i do now
Leave the demons behind
Walk away start again
She has lost her mind and feels no pain

The lover you have is a bitch
The lover you have is a bitch

She knows how to fly
And she wont say goodbye

The lover you have is a bitch
The lover you have is a bitch
The lover you have is a bitch
The lover you have is a bitch
The lover you have is a bitch
The lover you have is a bitch
Copyright Guild No 2107880   Paul Brookes

[The Corsair]

I think this is quite an interesting song. In some ways it's a bit cliched but the writing is fairly good in most places. Also, I quite like that it doesn't fanny about with all sorts of 'I was better, she's terrible' things and outright says 'they're a bitch'. The rudeness and bluntness of it is quite refreshing and I think captures the sentiment of the song without being whiny, which is what most songs like this turn out like.

[stokie63]

I think this is quite an interesting song. In some ways it's a bit cliched but the writing is fairly good in most places. Also, I quite like that it doesn't fanny about with all sorts of 'I was better, she's terrible' things and outright says 'they're a bitch'. The rudeness and bluntness of it is quite refreshing and I think captures the sentiment of the song without being whiny, which is what most songs like this turn out like.

Thank you for your observations corsair much appreciated and your comments will be taken on board.The song is based on a past experience .I have just had it set to music a good friend of mine took time out from his busy work schedule to assist me .I dont sing or play just a passion for writing lyrics .Iam happy with what Nick Fielding has done overall you have to listen to it to appreciate more.

[melfen]

more like rap lyrics, which isn't a bad thing thats the way things are going. 

[stokie63]

more like rap lyrics, which isn't a bad thing thats the way things are going. 

Thanks for your imput everyone interprets lyrics differently depending on there style of play and mood.