Leavin

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MariaKay

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« on: April 28, 2012, 04:06:57 PM »
Hey everyone!  It's been a little while since I've posted a new song cuz I've been busy with a lot of stuff lately and I haven't really had a chance to write that much. However, I just finished this song, so I figured that I would post it. I started it on April 14, 2012. At the time I wrote it, I was having mixed feelings about a guy, and I wrote this to reflect the "it's time to move on" side. But here's "Leavin", I hope you all like it. And any comments, questions, criticism... ANYTHING is welcome

I guess its time for our paths to change
I didn't think it would come so soon
I guess we could just put this off
But I'm not waitin till next June

It's time to let go
Cuz I can't hold on anymore
And it hurts to say so
But I'll never win this war

It's time to walk away so I'm leavin
I've got to go I'm barely breathin
I'll keep you in my memory every night when you're gone
But right now I'm leavin cuz I've held on too long

I never thought that I would say this
But I'm starting to lose hold of you
I can't say that I don't love you
But I'm starting to think its true

It's time to let go
Cuz I can't hold on anymore
And it hurts to say so
But I'll never win this war

It's time to walk away so I'm leavin
I've got to go I'm barely breathin
I'll keep you in my memory every night when you're gone
But right now I'm leavin cuz I've held on too long

I've held on too long it's time to let go
And it hurts me so bad us there's a couple things that you should know
I don't wanna leave you here alone
But it's time for me to go

It's time to walk away so I'm leavin
I've got to go I'm barely breathin
I'll keep you in my memory every night when you're gone
But right now I'm leavin cuz I've held on too long

Peppermint

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« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2012, 04:37:06 PM »
I think it conveys your message (wanting to move on) very well. :)