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Caifx004

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« on: April 23, 2012, 08:14:30 AM »
Look at all the people
Seeing with their eyes closed
Looking back at yesterday
Waiting for tomorrow
Watching life slip away
While sinking in sorrow

Close your eyes
Watch your troubles slip away
Close your eyes
Be prepared for better day

Do you see beyond the door
Don't you know what you're looking for

I've seen life
It seems so long now
I still don't understand
What's wrong now

Look at all the people
Running in fear
Like rats in a maze
Like a lion in a cage

Does anyone know the answer
Does anyone have a question

I feel lost
In the confusion
I feel
It's just an illusion

Close your eyes
Watch your life pass you by
Close your eyes
Now you're outta time
« Last Edit: May 13, 2012, 10:50:13 AM by Caifx004 »

laurabh

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« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2012, 11:13:50 AM »
I really like this, the lyrics are excellent and have a lot of meaning to me, and everyone else I'm sure. I'd really like to hear this!

Caifx004

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« Reply #2 on: April 23, 2012, 09:27:11 PM »
Me too.... I wish I could hear it.... I don't know if hearing it in your head counts for much... But I thank you very much for your kind review... I have others posted and I try to write most so they can have different meanings for different people... Thanx again

laurabh

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« Reply #3 on: April 23, 2012, 09:40:17 PM »
Yoy're very welcome, could you check 'Change my mind' out for me, let me know what you think

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« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2012, 03:00:00 PM »

Close your eyes
Watch your troubles slip away
Close your eyes
Be prepared for better day"

reminds me of a nursery rhyme O_o but its good put this in recording :D

Caifx004

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« Reply #5 on: April 29, 2012, 02:33:01 AM »
Wish I knew how to do that.... Thanx for the kind words...