Close Corsair, she's not a hooker lol, she's...uhh, she likes to sleep with lots of people, and I wasn't dating her, she's a friend...but she ruined her life and I tried to help her... also, I'll keep that in mind, this was only a quick one, so I suppose I rushed it and those lines weren't as good as they could have been,
Also, thanks Kaf, that's my favorite thing about writing, and I'm glad I do it well, that's what makes me want to keep writing
thanks to everyone else also, means a lot to me when people say nice things about my writing, believe it or not, it does make a massive difference.