[Matt B]

No one sees what I’ve see,
Has been where I’ve been,
Seen inside my head,
Where the secrets are kept.
 
Pretty little lies,
Don’t mean to compromise,
What i gave you,
What you are giving me,
I couldn't give that up.
Oh no. oh no.
 
We sang, we drank
Sang and laughed
Until the lights went out,
Time passed us by
A fairy-tale
Just a speech
I’m out of reach
 
You’re everything to me
Thirty reasons for me to leave
The silver lining
Coins to compensate
Lies from me (to you)
Oh.
 
We sang
We sang
I laughed
We sang
 
We sang, We drank
Sang and laughed
Until the lights went out
Time passed us by
A fairy-tale
It was just a speech
I’m out of reach
 
You cannot see what ive seen
Be where I’ve been
See inside of my head
Which secrets that I’ve kept.

[The Corsair]

Solid. The only thing that seems out of place is 'Don’t mean to compromise', it feels a bit like a rhyme filler and it doesn't seem to make much sense in context.

[Matt B]

Well i was talking about not compromisng a relationship but i see what you mean. It doesn't seem to fit that well. Cheers for feedback.

[melfen]

interesting, thoughtfull,and a bit confusing, but then songs mean different things to different people.

[postmn]

Hm, its different, good word choice, nice story telling, keep em coming