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Dead Give Away

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Caifx004

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« on: April 16, 2012, 04:09:06 AM »
Where has the money gone
When will this end
Looks like a congressional
S crew up again
To be rich or a puppeteer
Spending your life in luxury
Fellow man
Must understand
That’s the way it will always be

Dead give away
Dead give away
Got nothing to do
But plenty to say
Dead give away
Dead give away
Don’t you know
When the price is paid

Who’s got the ideas
Where are the clues
Doesn’t matter anyway
You’re bound to lose
Working so hard what do you earn
And meanwhile you’re getting burned
Who’s got the answers does anybody know
The God damned bureaucrats are running the show
So take your time
And take some more
Nobody’s ready
To slam the door

Dead give away
Dead give away
That’s the way it is
And will always be
Dead give away
Dead give away
And all the blind eyes
Will never see

Dead give away
Dead give away
They take it away
Then give it away
Dead give away

The Corsair

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« Reply #1 on: April 16, 2012, 05:38:10 AM »
Hey man, might be an idea to post some reviews of other people's stuff before posting more of your own, otherwise people aren;t going to want to review your stuff
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« Reply #2 on: April 16, 2012, 01:54:40 PM »
Interesting lyrics and interesting take on things. Sound quite indie and indie is coming back in fashion so write on.
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« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2012, 07:37:33 PM »
Thanx Melvin... I like to think you can take my work into different points of view

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« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2012, 03:00:52 PM »


try and add a 3 verse, but its good, keep em coming :D

Caifx004

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« Reply #5 on: April 29, 2012, 02:37:01 AM »
This would be a fast song... Almost punk... So I would love to leave room for a killer lead before the last chorus... But once again I thank you for your review... I would like to know what you think of A Fact of Life ... If you get a chance to read it... Might be on page 2 by now... Thanx again...