konalavadome

need some advice?

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« on: April 08, 2012, 03:21:20 AM »
Hmm don't know where to put this so I suppose maybe here?

So I was thinking, maybe I could write some lyrics, but like a letter to my future self, I already started writing it...but...I'm not sure its working...or going to be a thought provoking story behind it, I want it to have real feeling, but it's hard to write this, I'm not sure why...

Here's what I got so far anyway, it's gonna be A LOT longer by the way and probably only gonna keep a few lines of this...but basically just want to know if its a good idea?

A message to my future self

Do I ever end up where I want to?


Though I can't know for sure
I'm hopeful that one day I find a cure

I hope you're happy now
I hope you're happy, for me, for you, please
For the both of us


From yourself in the past
What if we both just smiled at once?

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« Reply #1 on: April 08, 2012, 03:41:35 AM »
hahaha nevermind, I already wrote it now.
What if we both just smiled at once?