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First thing, don't post 6 songs at once, you'll get no responses. Also, please post some reviews on other people's songs and lyrics before continuing to post.
That said a and done, I'm going to go about reviewing all the other songs briefly (given that I only skimmed them) and review this one a bit more in-depth.
The others are quite generic, but do have hints of good storytelling and the like and I think your idea of bringing in modern youth terms (socially awkward penguin, forever alone, etc) is interesting. It's not quite done right but it's at least somewhat original.
This lyric here I consider to be the best you've posted. It's fun for starters, which is always a great thing. I like the combination of stories and such people will recognise as they listen, that gives it an interesting personality.
It's not entirely original in premise though, but then again it's difficult to be enormously original in terms of premise in the first place.
Like I said, please review some other people's songs before continuing to post and please don't post in such volume again
