Another short song competition song - male/female

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stickboymusic

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« on: March 28, 2012, 01:42:56 PM »
Hello

I like this short song thing.... got my friend to help with vocals on this one

http://picosong.com/wyXS/

When we come together.

I like the morning
and i like the evening
I like the magical
and i like something to believe in

I like the rainclouds
and i like the sunshine
I like the mystery
and i like knowing everythings fine

But when we come together
we both like L-O-V-E
no matter what the weather
I will need you and you need me

I like the movies
and I like the TV
I like a resteraunt
And i like eating on the settee

But when we come together
we both like L-O-V-E
no matter what the weather
I will need you and you need me
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« Reply #1 on: March 28, 2012, 02:28:21 PM »
Hiya :) Wouldn't be out of place on Cbeebies :)
It's a good little number. Simple, concise, rpetative and sing-alongable. Probably just made that word up haha.
I think it'd be perfect for kids t.v.
Well done  ;D
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« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2012, 06:05:02 PM »
Charming! Oh oh oh!
Now the light is dimming, but we're glowing from within. We are shiny.

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« Reply #3 on: March 28, 2012, 06:11:29 PM »
All of a sudden i feel very happy  :)

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« Reply #4 on: March 28, 2012, 06:13:30 PM »
sweet as a nut. Great little song love the voices - good fun lyric - great fun - I could really imagine that working as a soundtrack to a telecom commercial - or a bank or something - seriously have you tried to sell this to some ad agencies - I think they might be really interested in what you have to offer. All the best BTB
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« Reply #5 on: March 28, 2012, 06:24:11 PM »
wow thats incredibly catchy & quite irresistible! you only need 1 listen
its also twee but thats unimportant here
the 2 voices work well on alternate lines in the verses
in terms of a perfect catchy short pop song its unbeatable!
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« Reply #6 on: March 28, 2012, 10:43:22 PM »
Thanks people - i think it would have been half the song if i had chosen to sing it all

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« Reply #7 on: March 28, 2012, 11:06:50 PM »


yes wonderful track
cbeebies is right too
i love those little people songs, really uplifting
terrific
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« Reply #8 on: March 28, 2012, 11:39:24 PM »
This short song comp has brought out the best.

Yet another gem.  Still grinning  ;D.
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« Reply #9 on: March 29, 2012, 12:19:17 AM »
This is great , very beautiful south , it was so uplifting i nearly smiled at the wife  :-* just  joking i did smile at her , as i do often ,  the song sounded well played and recorded ,and happy.
i listened to it 3 times now , very well done .
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« Reply #10 on: March 29, 2012, 12:42:49 AM »
 :D :D :D @ andy5544
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« Reply #11 on: March 29, 2012, 10:09:55 AM »
i just can't stand this sort of songs but its very well done indeed



gr.   Dan

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« Reply #12 on: March 29, 2012, 10:37:43 AM »
The production and arrangement on this absolutely spot on. Really good job. I know you're supposed to say something critical but you've made that a difficult job with this one

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« Reply #13 on: March 29, 2012, 11:43:35 AM »
Still smiling! My ten year old immediately started dancing around in the living room just now to this song, that says it all!

perfectly crafted song!

Very very sweet  ;D

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« Reply #14 on: March 29, 2012, 07:47:07 PM »
I like this! I know it's a bit twee but I think her voice brings it up a notch. It's got an interesting quality that keeps it from sounding over cute. Addictive little hook  ;)