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Short Song Competition Entry - come away

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gerrybhoy

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« on: March 22, 2012, 09:19:47 AM »
Written as part of 50/90 2011, I think?

come away

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« Reply #1 on: March 22, 2012, 09:58:17 AM »
blimey thats a clever little song. Great playing - vocals fantastic BV's - love it.BTB
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« Reply #2 on: March 22, 2012, 10:17:28 AM »
Another great short song. Nice harmonies and overall great production.

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« Reply #3 on: March 22, 2012, 10:26:27 AM »
short and simply nice.




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« Reply #4 on: March 22, 2012, 02:06:13 PM »
Very pleasant. Nice to see a slice of country on here!

Nowt boundry shattering/defining here, just a nice little song with some well done vocals and harmonies!

And a good one to keep at 1.30secs. Would work lovely as a cheeky album ender perhaps?!

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« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2012, 04:31:10 PM »
Really nice country song, very catchy tune,great, nice one mate  :) :) :) :)

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« Reply #6 on: March 22, 2012, 05:29:22 PM »
Get in there Gerry Bhoy !

Glorious my friend , just glorious  :D

I can hear Gerry Rafferty in this or probably more the humble bums

It's very nicely done mate :)

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« Reply #7 on: March 22, 2012, 06:00:20 PM »

yeh gerry rafferty or lindisfarne, good vocals again,
could hear this one longer , kind of pub jug newcastley night out..
good one gb
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« Reply #8 on: March 22, 2012, 07:02:05 PM »
i dont remember hearing this at 50/90 gerry but then you wrote such a lot of great songs for that i couldnt listen to them all!
as im a bit of a connosieur of your work id say this is not you at your strongest ..... but its still very nice :)
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« Reply #9 on: March 22, 2012, 11:00:21 PM »
Thank you all for the very kind comments with special thanks to Tina for her frankness :)
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« Reply #10 on: March 23, 2012, 01:10:11 AM »
I though Frank had become Tina's new name?  :P

I like Frank Tina :)

Anyway, again... this is all I seem to be typing tonight but very, very well done :)

Loved those vocals.  ;D
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« Reply #11 on: March 23, 2012, 07:11:05 AM »
Nice country playing :D It doesnt sound so much like a fully formed 'short song' to me...more like a song thats waiting to be finished...

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« Reply #12 on: March 23, 2012, 07:42:33 AM »
I enjoyed this instantly.  Vocally, It put me in mind of David Gray  I could imagine this getting into my head very quickly.  Very catchy.  Excellent work.  Well done!

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« Reply #13 on: April 02, 2012, 06:57:43 PM »
Loved it! I like me some country music
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