hi there! i wrote this lyric in my mother language, portuguese. now i'm trying to translate it into English, but I need some help! lol!
well, the lyric is poetic, so it's a bit nonsense. but more than that, i'd like to know if there are some mistakes. i put between parenthesis some words i'm not sure which one to choose. all kind of feedback is welcome!
thank you very much!
here it goes:
I WILL LAND RIGHT ON YOUR HAND
Tell me a sight, (or look?)
I'll greet you with a smile
Give me your hand and more
I'll show you where to go
Get me out to dance
and I propose us to run away
I will find you in the ocean
In the deep sea, endless blue
Pick your flower the whole year long
I will plant you in my garden
Pretend it was just a mistake
I'm gonna steal you just for me
Into your deep of your eyes
I'm gonna make my home
In the waves of your hair
My bonds of eternal love
And it is on your lips
I make my speech
I'll dive into your secret
I wanna swim into your summer
I wanna dream of your smile
and gonna wake up on your bed
I'm gonna float above your center
and land right on your hand