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Kayles86

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« on: March 14, 2012, 10:29:37 PM »
Days fade and i need the night seen your dumb face most of my life
die in the summer time,die while im young.   p.s i have severe writers block right now and its frustrating :-(
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« Reply #1 on: March 14, 2012, 11:28:52 PM »
I can sympathize, we've all been there. Hopefully it doesn't last too long.

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« Reply #2 on: March 14, 2012, 11:40:46 PM »
I've just had a bout of that, god it's frustrating  :(

More sympathy here
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« Reply #3 on: March 15, 2012, 01:04:45 AM »
Days fade and i need the night seen your dumb face most of my life
die in the summer time,die while im young.   p.s i have severe writers block right now and its frustrating :-(

and then what d'you know, spring is sprung..'
i may not believe this tomorrow...

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« Reply #4 on: March 15, 2012, 05:13:15 AM »
"Speak while I still can, or lose my tongue"

That popped in to my head as a rhyme for young sorry, felt like throwing it out there. Might not fit at all.

We've all been there with writers block. When I have it bad I have sheets and sheets of paper with short phrases written on them, all of them being potentials for songs. It really gets to me when I have a great line and can't flesh it out into an equally great song. I can really sympathise with you here.
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« Reply #5 on: March 15, 2012, 08:54:32 PM »
Thanks corsair yeah it realy bugs me I realy flow on like a verse but when it comes to a chorus an 2nd verse my brain just stops an in the end it gets left. Its rare for me now to be able to be on fire and complete a song its so frustrating as I know I can write when my brain functions :-(
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