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Pez's interpretation of U2's Exit
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Pez
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Pez's interpretation of U2's Exit
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March 06, 2012, 11:17:42 PM »
http://soundcloud.com/the-unstable-fabulists/pez-exit
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cheff daniel
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Re: Pez's interpretation of U2's Exit
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March 07, 2012, 10:10:00 AM »
a lot of potention i think. love that bass and guitars, drums needs variation. also you need another strong change in the chorus, or may be a bridge somewhere, just to keep it fresh and surprising. but well done.
gr. Dan
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Pez
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March 07, 2012, 09:54:27 PM »
Thanks yeah I agree it would benefit from some variation,switchin up here and there. Are you familiar with the original version off the joshua tree? brilliant.
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