[laurabh]

So I've taken some of the advice I've been given for my latest song,

Stuck in my mind

You’re on your own, I look over, you look back.
But it’s like I’m not there, you gaze right through me.
I’m all alone, I don’t understand, but I’m too afraid to ask.

Why does it have to be this way?
We’re not that different, I’m not insane.
When are you gonna start to realise?
That what you need, is not so far away.

I’m feelin it.
But you’re not feeling it.
You’re stuck right in my mind
I’m seeing you,
But to you I’m invisible,
You’re stuck right in my mind.

When I smile, you look away, I didn’t realise it was such a crime.
You and me, we go back a long time, do you remember?
It been a long while now, and I’m starting to think I’m wasting my time

Why does it have to be this way?
We’re not that different, I’m not insane.
When are you gonna start to realise?
That what you need, is not so far away.

I’m feelin it
But you’re not feeling it
You’re stuck right in my mind
I’m seeing you,
But to you I’m invisible,
You’re stuck right in my mind.

I can’t help it if I feel this way
Why can’t you feel the same?
I want to erase you from my mind?
But it’s not that easy, I’ve tried and my thoughts don’t seem to go away..

You came over, and asked me out, how could I refuse?
We went on a date, stayed out so late, we were dancing to the blues.
But it was only a dream, and I’m starting to think, I’m losing my mind.

Why does it have to be this way?
We’re not that different, I’m not insane.
When are you gonna start to realise?
That what you need, is not so far away.

I’m feelin it
But you’re not feeling it
You’re stuck right in my mind
I’m seeing you,
But to you I’m invisible,
You’re stuck right in my mind.

I’m feelin it
But you’re not feeling it
You’re stuck right in my mind
I’m seeing you,
But to you I’m invisible,
You’re stuck right in my mind.

Stuck in my mind.

[bewarethisboy]

I think this looks interesting Laura - have you recorded it as song?

[ShAaShAy]

Pretty nice, the lyrics are simple yet effective if you know what i mean..
message comes out clear to me. nice!

[Sellon]

not gonna lie, I hate songs like this but...this would probably make a really good pop song...

[laurabh]

Thanks! I haven't recorded this as a song. I'm learning guitar, so soon I should be able to add a little music to it
My aim was to make it fit into the "Pop" genre, I'm influenced by writers like DrLuke and Max Martin. However, I am trying to improve and become a little more "original".