Hiya again
You know you had me listening intently once again. I really like what you are doing
but it is being spoiled a bit by the performance. Please don't take that badly. As the song
progressed, your guitar playing and your vocals grew less tentative but not enough.
Do you record at night? I do, and that forces me to sometimes be quiet, or to record certain parts
like vocals during the day when I'm not disturbing anyone.
The timing of the guitars isn't right but I fear that that may also be because you are playing so tentatively.
If you were to be more assured in your playing, a bit more aggressive I'm sure you would find it easier to keep it tight.
The same goes for the vocals. Yes they are clearer and higher in the mix but you are still singing them very quietly.
I can hear that you have a very nice tone to your voice so PLEASE!!! Give it some more projection.
Promise you it will be worth it