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Bubbles in Puddles (Instrumental)
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nooms
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Re: Bubbles in Puddles (Instrumental)
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Reply #15 on:
February 29, 2012, 12:21:02 AM »
love the first half schav, inspired..
but lost it when it got busy...bet that was the point you started to ‘compose’
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Schavuitje
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Re: Bubbles in Puddles (Instrumental)
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February 29, 2012, 12:44:11 AM »
I got a little excited
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innerdream
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Re: Bubbles in Puddles (Instrumental)
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Reply #17 on:
February 29, 2012, 09:28:33 AM »
listening as im typing and haven't read any replies before my post - i like the percussion/sample sounds in the intro, really cool
kinda reminds me of a video game soundtrack - dont know if youve played Zelda - Ocarina of Time but the intro reminds me of the Zora's lake/ice palace level - that game has some seriously EPIC music on it
For me it doesnt really go anywhere after that as there is no real standout melody for me but you have painted a lovely landscape with this music - seriously beautiful soundscape
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Reply #18 on:
February 29, 2012, 10:25:59 PM »
Seems a little like you're playing 2 songs at once to me...i mean, i like the sounds and all, but...I think you should keep at it though, you can easily do better man
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Schavuitje
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Re: Bubbles in Puddles (Instrumental)
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Reply #19 on:
March 01, 2012, 12:30:42 AM »
That's called counterpoint my friend
Glad you liked it
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