[Andy]

This song is about those who have been whining at us since the pandemic.
Don't know if it's okay to include the link to the song here. If not, let me know.
I'm also happy to receive criticism (on grammar and pronunciation) if my English isn't always the best



LITTLE SCREAMER

Hey you little Screamer what are you trying to tell me.
Don't you know what to do with your day, but coming up with those talse.

CHORUS:
Hey you little screamer. You're all talk and no brains.

Hey you little wooden head. Sure you can tell me what to do.
I need some easy solutions, that fit in my small head.

You've got the insight. You know what's going on.

CHORUS (2x)

Hey dim-witted cowboy, You just parrot what you hear.
It's good to know you're fading away. Saddle up and hit the road.


Are you the one to get us out of here? Who even called you?

CHORUS (2x)

B-Part:
Now you run around and tell your stories. Turn on your brain.
I dont’t share your worries. Hit the road and tell someone else.
Can’t get it in my head. It’s too much for me. Stop wasting time.
Stop bothering me. I ain’t got no time to give away.


You've got the insight. You know what's going on.

Hey you little screamer. You're all talk and no brains.
Hey you little screamer. You've got your own perception.
Hey you little screamer. No chips in our arms
Hey you little screamer. You're all talk and no brains.



Here's the link to this song:
https://soundcloud.com/andreas-strott/little-screamer?si=c13367245d804636bff0088ced573f3b&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

[Nick Ryder]

Hi Andy,

this is very good and like with your previous post, the acoustic guitar sound and your vocal are great.

What plans do you have for the song? Would you record it with a full band at some point?

I think that even though you do not deviate from a very simple chord progression that much, the song still works as your melody line has variety.

Just a quick not to say that its good etiquette on the forum to review others work as well as posting your own for review.

Have a great day and keep up the good work!!

[PaulAds]

Hi Andy

I’ve checked out all of your songs…they’re all good.

You’re a really good singer and guitarist and the songs sound very well produced too.

I’m not sure what you’re trying to say here, though.

It might be best to avoid tackling contentious issues in a foreign language if it’s not your strong point. Especially if you’re going to throw insults around…even if they’re meant light-heartedly 😀

I think that all of your posts thus far have been your songs and introducing yourself…if so, that’s ok, we all have to start somewhere, but please spare a thought for other members and their songs and try to pass them a comment while you’re here. I’m sure they’ll appreciate it.

You’ll get more interest in your own songs that way, too.