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moraamarolaloba

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« on: June 30, 2024, 11:21:14 AM »
Hola chicos". I hope you are ok!!!
This song... hmmm I don't know exactly how to define it... a sad song? maybe but.. it's something else, like lyrics say.
Fight a lot doing it, I had choose a backing of Marcus that I liked a lot but then I did not find synths or other sounds that fit or had the correct key... but finally I reached something balanced.
I hope it entertains you.






It is not sadness
that invades me
it's something else
nameless
dangerous and deep
 

and while I  look for a name
a strange cold clings to my hands
and crawls little by little
up ny arms
 
If I let it reach my heart
what would happen then?
would it freeze?
Would it break
if I moved?
 
It is not sadness that invades me
it is it is...
desolation?
a leafless life?
a truth that now screams?
 
and while I wonder
 
« Last Edit: June 30, 2024, 11:27:12 AM by moraamarolaloba »
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« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2024, 11:53:36 AM »
Hi Mora,

what can I say? you never disappoint, your songs create a mood, I love it, thank you for sharing,

George

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« Reply #2 on: June 30, 2024, 01:35:04 PM »
Gracias @Jazz101 much appreciated
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« Reply #3 on: June 30, 2024, 08:00:41 PM »
You have a voice for the movies, and it really fit in nicely with the beat, mood, and melody like it was made for this song. I like it, very entertaining to me.

I love these opening lines;

It is not sadness
that invades me
it's something else
nameless
dangerous and deep

The other lyric aren't as strong though.

Anyways this is my take and all I have to say at this time.

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« Reply #4 on: June 30, 2024, 11:26:46 PM »
Loving this one Mora. It has a great vibe and some awesome dynamics. It's hard to know what to say when something is as good as this. Fabulous :)

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« Reply #5 on: July 01, 2024, 12:23:40 AM »
That's cool , seems it would fit in the sync world
Very nice Mora !!!

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« Reply #6 on: July 01, 2024, 08:36:07 PM »
You have a voice for the movies, and it really fit in nicely with the beat, mood, and melody like it was made for this song. I like it, very entertaining to me.

I love these opening lines;

It is not sadness
that invades me
it's something else
nameless
dangerous and deep

The other lyric aren't as strong though.

Anyways this is my take and all I have to say at this time.

Irwin
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« Reply #7 on: July 04, 2024, 09:52:13 AM »
Loving this one Mora. It has a great vibe and some awesome dynamics. It's hard to know what to say when something is as good as this. Fabulous :)
Eres genial! Thank you so much, you always put me in a good mood!!! Have a nice day @ChrisPrice
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« Reply #8 on: July 05, 2024, 10:22:58 AM »
That's cool , seems it would fit in the sync world
Very nice Mora !!!

Hola Elvis, gracias!!!!, sec world? EDM? are you referring to that?
Still fishing?
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« Reply #9 on: July 08, 2024, 07:43:55 AM »
Hola Mora,

Great brooding atmosphere. Also your mixes are always solid, crips and punchy. Very professional… as always  :)

Cheers, Dorian
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« Reply #10 on: July 08, 2024, 09:09:08 AM »
@moraamarolaloba Another lovely atmospheric piece, with a great driving rhythm. This would work well as a soundtrack. Kevin

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« Reply #11 on: July 10, 2024, 10:56:14 AM »
Hola Mora,

Great brooding atmosphere. Also your mixes are always solid, crips and punchy. Very professional… as always  :)

Cheers, Dorian

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« Reply #12 on: July 12, 2024, 08:52:13 AM »
A lovely brooding musical backdrop, inspired by the really cool guitar Mora. It's a dark composition that leaves us with an uneasy feeling.

Great work

Paul

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« Reply #13 on: July 12, 2024, 11:09:17 AM »
@moraamarolaloba Another lovely atmospheric piece, with a great driving rhythm. This would work well as a soundtrack. Kevin

Hola @kevysc
Gracias!!! I like a lot this one, a piece of mirror from someday
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