this is how the rich win the war

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« Reply #15 on: April 11, 2024, 01:44:18 PM »
Hola @rightly
This 3/4 has put the dance on my feet... the waltz of the vampires... A dance of realities that, more than dancing, digs a furrow in the ground that leaves the bones and remains of all of us exposed. ...
Good job!!
Well said, Mora.
It's very seldom I try to sound modern.
Others will do that, I'll find my restrictions elsewhere.

I don't know if it's true
 but I recently told someone I'm not a soul seeker,
I'd rather dance.
She told me this song couldn't be danced to, so I danced,
(Without once bending my knees!)

Glad you liked the song. 🙂

It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #16 on: April 11, 2024, 02:21:07 PM »
Hey man , dig the 3/4 time
Yeah its pretty bad on power struggles
Another useless election , Why bother ,
Good job man !!!

Yes, regarding politics
I tend to be a bit nihilistic
Not so in other aspects of living.
Thanks elvis.


I don't think I'm nihilistic. It could be changed on structures from the inside, for less human suffering.
But I get your nihilistic ideology.
 

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« Reply #17 on: April 11, 2024, 06:46:05 PM »
The vocal sounds like it's coming up from the depths of history - a classic that fits the circumstances of any age.  It's a message that needs to be repeated until there's some semblance of equality and a fading into obscurity of privilege.

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« Reply #18 on: April 11, 2024, 11:03:16 PM »
Firstly, I'm loving the lyrics. The arrangement is totally off the wall in a very good way. The 3/4 waltz time works fabulously. I really like your music - it's like no other. This is one of your best imo. Excellent track :)

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« Reply #19 on: April 12, 2024, 03:01:47 PM »
The vocal sounds like it's coming up from the depths of history - a classic that fits the circumstances of any age.  It's a message that needs to be repeated until there's some semblance of equality and a fading into obscurity of privilege.

Thanks RC
It's not my thing to write political songs, usually.
I had to keep it very simple, I tried to veer away from anything exclusively subjective.
With the voicevstanding out as it does
I'm still not sure I should leave it like that.
In a moment of uncertainty i was following some badly articulated advice from a novice engineer

So glad you like the song.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #20 on: April 12, 2024, 03:06:40 PM »
Firstly, I'm loving the lyrics. The arrangement is totally off the wall in a very good way. The 3/4 waltz time works fabulously. I really like your music - it's like no other. This is one of your best imo. Excellent track :)

Was a pleasure reading your comment.
Yes the lyrics are good, at first I thought them throwaway
Then when singing spaciously I realised they're a sharp fit
and that I'm rarely this articulate.
I think we're on a similar wavelength.
 I'm happy to make your acquaintance. 😊
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly

https://soundcloud.com/rightly

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« Reply #21 on: April 18, 2024, 05:43:11 PM »
A timely piece considering the number and intensity of wars going on now.  I like how melodic this is - especially the vocals.