Hi, that was pretty interesting and it was all put together very well. The verses set things up well, then the chorus hit, and I thought "ah, this is satisfying", but then the chorus was over before I was done with it. I felt the melody had a number of places it could have went, making it a really catchy number, but then we were back in the verses. I did like the changes though, and the chord inversions worked well. Good stuff.