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« Reply #15 on: March 26, 2024, 06:48:45 PM »
Who knows on covid Mora , I've never caught it . But I don't watch the news , I guess the new strains come out . its been 2 years of bad , I think I see the end of tunnel, well for awhile anyway lol

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« Reply #16 on: March 27, 2024, 08:26:56 PM »
For me it's all over the place, there's no story that i can see, lines seem to be just randomly placed as it doesn't move from one to the next it just jumps from one thing to the next with no connection to any of the lines.

personally i couldn't tell you what's its about.

i once saw a podcast where 2 very successful songwriters talked about lyrics and they kept going on about k.i.s.s, which they meant as keep it simple stupid, lyrics need to be simple to sing, understand, relate too and remember.

now i'm no expert but i would suggest some co-writing so you have another voice involved, someone who can offer alternate lines and its a great learning thing.


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« Reply #17 on: March 27, 2024, 11:19:13 PM »
That was cowritten with a Nashville hit writer Danny , Its just a country boy song , singing in bars . Pretty simple story . I’ve studied with hit writers for 20 years Danny
The hook is a steal from the author who wrote “The 7 Habits of Highly Effective People” I added the Hammond organ on bridge , Now to sing this and add BGVS which will be 3 part gospel.  They're from Africa . the machine drums , will replaced with real drummer.
Thanks for listening Danny , Good luck on your musical Journey
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« Reply #18 on: March 28, 2024, 08:37:28 PM »
I'll be honest here coz i think you can take it,
your ego is huge and that's not a good thing, passive aggressive using the slightly wrong name in your reply then dropping that it was written with a hit writer, didn't name them though, and then that you have studied with hit writers for 20 years, then your own websites first line is, "i didn't set out to be a famous country star" , that points to the fact you think you are?

i'm not trying to be mean but its a massive red flag for me, my betting is your a radio host of your own internet radio show, that plays the things you like and probably your own stuff.

i'm just being honest here, but a major thing NOT to be to newbies is an ass, you failed.

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« Reply #19 on: March 29, 2024, 01:05:08 AM »
It just takes one . Typical ego driven American , Sorry I offended you . I border on narcissistic

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« Reply #20 on: March 31, 2024, 06:27:04 PM »
Everyone becomes a poet by puberty . The guy who said money is the root of all evil , probably had a drug addiction problem .
Marriage is basically legalized prostitution .

They said this, they said that . I've narrowed it down to Theodore They , His wife is Adjective They, All the kids are named after verbs .
if the unknown author is so smart , why is he unknown ?

if we hate violence so much , Why is 90 % of movies on murder. ? Ted Bunday got more press then Jesus .
if everything under the sun is being redundant , Why do we keep talking about everything under the sun ?


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Few edits and sing this , it will fly

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« Reply #21 on: April 02, 2024, 10:59:10 PM »
Now its done , wordy damn chorus
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« Reply #22 on: April 05, 2024, 03:02:10 PM »
Fantastic title and the lyrics don't disappoint @Elvis Nash . Very clever and it's a great production al in all. Nothing wrong with wordy (but I might perhaps be a little biased!!).

I absolutely LOVE this - everything about it.. I'm a fan!!

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« Reply #23 on: April 05, 2024, 03:12:13 PM »
It took a hour to sing the chorus , its wordy
Crazy time , Moving and fitting in going to studio
I never want to move again lol. The redtape on 2 escrows is enough drive ya nuts . You be out of your old place by 6pm , Man , a bit formal .
The producer said , what the hell do all them hip-hop lines mean ? Well man you better starting listening to kids and what they say now , groovy is a bit dated . lol...,,Circus tats is a famous LA tattoo artist


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« Reply #24 on: April 07, 2024, 02:41:44 AM »
Well done !!  Really enjoyed the video & music, There is an authenticity that shines
thru along with the excellent production that really captures your attention!

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« Reply #25 on: April 07, 2024, 12:23:08 PM »
I spent hours googling Hip -Hop Phrases to put in this song ,When I did , it gave me what they meant . Hmmm well that line will work. lol

shiznit – shit (usually in a general positive sense); used especially in the phrase “Thats tha Shiznit!”
fo’shizzle – for sure
skizzle – a drip of any sort of intoxicating liquid.
tizzle – tizzy, a state of agitation or nervousness.
wizzle – wigga
The most popular genre is Hip -Hop
If you look at kids . most are dressed like hip hop stars . or a lot anyway
I think the worse thing you can do is say todays music sucks , Even Rick Beato does that , Thats bs , it just shows how old you are.. like some kinda badge of honor., If you think about it , what's so great about being old ? Not much really .

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