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The Crow , ready to sing March 10th

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Elvis Nash:
THE CROW

(Verse I)
He digs with his wings rips open scars
Like a dark ghost in a graveyard
His needle claws ensnare me in a trap
And release the hidden demons of my past
When I sleep fear hurts my eyes
And I pray for a quick sunrise

(Chorus
The crow flies over his nightly playground
Like an ebony arrow making a hissing sound
He's A NEVER ENDING nightmare
Coal eyes with a cold blank stare
He haunts my heart and soul
LIKE A BIRD BY EDGAR ALLAN POE
That nocturnal CURSE the crow

(Verse II)
Caw! Caw! Hear his blood shrieking cry
See his silhouette in the moonlit sky
He casts a spell of sheer misery
I can’t hide from his trickery
He’s got black magic evil voodoo
Stronger than any witches brew

(Repeat Chorus)

(Instrumental Bridge) solo )

God Bless the morning
He’s gone
In his place a white dove
And a lovely dawn

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Cut that solo in half , got a bad ass Sax part to throw in there
Digging a real drummer and not a machine

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