Crash And Burn

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ChrisPrice

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« on: January 30, 2024, 12:19:03 AM »
I hope I'm not breaking any forum rules here. I posted this song in the 'Works In Progress' section the other day, but the consensus has been to keep this song as it is, so I've now put it on Soundcloud and it's here in the 'Finished Songs' section.

I wrote the bulk of this song back in 2012 but shelved it as the original chorus was a bit too close to something well known. I just decided to do a partial re-write and record it as an acoustic song.

Crash And Burn
Words and Music written by Chris Price ©2012



Passing through, I think I’m fallin’
and as I do, is it you there callin’ me
I left no stone unturned, some guys they can’t wait their turn
but I did and you watched me crash and burn

In the night, two ships were passing
Shinin’ bright, the sound of laughter’s loud
You said what’s yours is mine, that this thread it can save nine
She stitch me up and she watch me crash and burn

I was the man standing in your doorway, walkin’ no man’s land
So here I am, you can have it your way, take me while you can

If I knew then all that I know now
Would I spend another precious hour with you
There can be no mistake, one more hit for heaven’s sake
Kiss me then and then she watch me crash and burn

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« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2024, 12:21:15 AM »
I liked how you proved crash and burn Chris
Cool track good blending of vocals and such
Good job !!

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« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2024, 08:40:43 AM »
Oh
Stone cold classic
Great job. 👍

Did you break the rules?

"Rock star breaks rules with release of crash and burn!!"

Nice one Chris!
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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ChrisPrice

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« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2024, 10:12:43 AM »
Oh
Stone cold classic
Great job. 👍

Did you break the rules?

"Rock star breaks rules with release of crash and burn!!"

Nice one Chris!
Ha ha...As rock star headlines go it isn't quite in the same league as trashing hotel bedrooms and smashing equipment up on stage but, at my age, it's as rock n roll as it gets!! ;D
Thanks for listening and kind words mate. :)

rightly

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« Reply #4 on: January 31, 2024, 11:25:27 AM »
Oh
Stone cold classic
Great job. 👍

Did you break the rules?

"Rock star breaks rules with release of crash and burn!!"

Nice one Chris!
Ha ha...As rock star headlines go it isn't quite in the same league as trashing hotel bedrooms and smashing equipment up on stage but, at my age, it's as rock n roll as it gets!! ;D
Thanks for listening and kind words mate. :)

I had a loud quarrel with a musician
My mother expressed concern
I told her not to worry, it won't get messy,
Guitarists don't want to hurt their hands with slapping each other.
My brother thought it funny. 😁
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly

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« Reply #5 on: February 01, 2024, 12:08:38 AM »
I commented on the work in progress post before noticing you posted the finished version already lol welp
well, I am glad people had the same opnion as me, and that you agreed and kept it as an guitar song. It is really good as it is. Happy to hear it finished.

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« Reply #6 on: February 01, 2024, 03:47:03 PM »
@ChrisPrice  Really like this one. It has your distinctive rocking soundtrack, but with a some extra frills and chord changes. It is great as it is, but I would be tempted to take the volume of your vocals down a tad. Good stuff!

Kevin

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« Reply #7 on: February 11, 2024, 11:16:14 PM »
@ChrisPrice

As usual good and high-quality rock!
I really liked the bridge at 1:00 - 1:28. Fresh flow of the melody and harmonies! I listened to it several times!  :)

Maya