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shadowfax

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« on: January 28, 2024, 03:02:32 PM »
Hi peeps, just a song, if you take a listen I thank you.. :)

https://soundcloud.com/shadowfax67/hold-the-light-by-shadowfax67?si=d2186e2b45b24dbcb065d2551544ab3a&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

You call my name,
you lay asleep,
you dream a dream that I can't see,
words fade away,
while darkness keeps,
all secrets hidden till the day,

we'll never know x2

hold the light
hold the light with me,
hold the light and then we'll see,
Shine the light,
shine the light with me,
shine the light and then we'll see. 

long shadows fall,
before we know,
removing colours from our eye's,
and as this wall of darkness grows,
we find it easier to hide,

hold the light
hold the light with me,
hold the light and then we'll see,
Shine the light,
shine the light with me,
shine the light and then we'll see. 

Don't let the darkness fool you wait till break of day,
there will always be better way;
darkness  will hide the truth but darkness fades away,
darkness fades away it fades away.

« Last Edit: January 28, 2024, 03:04:04 PM by shadowfax »
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« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2024, 05:10:51 PM »
@shadowfax Always glad to take a listen. Slow build up to a very strong chorus. I like your keyboard driven arrangement. I can imagine a much bigger arrangement which would be a real crowd pleaser at a festival. As it stands it's a very good listen. I can't fault this at all. I enjoyed it. :)

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« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2024, 09:31:27 PM »
Nice build and lovely Rhodes keyboard sounds Kev. Vocals are crystal clear and production is fabulous. Like the nice 808 kick in there, great depth and beautiful harmony Vox. Top stuff @shadowfax 😀

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« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2024, 11:10:33 PM »
HEY SF
Great production on this , BGVS blend great !!
Sounds real professional all the way around .

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« Reply #4 on: January 29, 2024, 09:40:52 AM »
Very well crafted this.  That simple intro definitely draws me in to wanting to hear what comes next and it doesn’t disappoint.  I like the way it builds and the vocals are lovely.

Cheers - John.

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« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2024, 03:14:46 PM »

hi
i really like this , nice E Piano & Vocals
Build up is nice plenty light & shade  & not over filled
also nice to hear someone else on the forum doing a smooth laid back song

Great Stuff

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« Reply #6 on: January 31, 2024, 08:33:47 AM »
Yes to this.
One of my favourites from you.
You just keep them coming
As ever, top quality!
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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Theresa

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« Reply #7 on: February 01, 2024, 12:17:32 AM »
Outstanding vibes, would love to drive at night while listening to it.

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« Reply #8 on: February 01, 2024, 03:40:25 PM »
@shadowfax  Another lovely Euro- Love-Ballad, finely crafted production, strong melody building into a strong chorus. Easy to listen to ( in a good way) , you are a model of consistency.

Kevin

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« Reply #9 on: February 11, 2024, 11:08:35 PM »
@shadowfax

Beautiful lyrics surrounded by a gentle melody.
Beautiful sound, wonderful vocals!  :)

Maya