God Pity Monday's Child

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RC James

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« on: January 22, 2024, 02:15:26 AM »
Starr wrote this as a tribute to Langston Hughes, hence the language which Hughes used in much of his poetry.

 

 

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God pity Monday’s child,
da child whose heart is o’datt day.

‘N God pity Monday’s child,
da child who knows no otha way;
sho’nuff knows no otha way
fo’ his heart is o’datt day,
da longess,’ blackess’ day

 

Tell me where you hurt

talk ta me chil' a trubble

deep down in that rubble

fo'get the owner's mumble

he set now ta trip an' stumble

his dream ' bout to crumble

 

'n juss what is one t'do

till da work week's fin'ly done wit. Lawd?

 

God pity Monday's child

da chil' whose heart is o' datt day

da chil' who knows no otha way

sho'nuff his heart is o'datt day

da longess,' blackess' day

 

'n juss what is one t'do

till da work week's fin'ly done wit, Lawd

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« Reply #1 on: January 25, 2024, 07:29:45 AM »
This sounds pretty good! With proper mixing and mastering, it would sound really good :)

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« Reply #2 on: January 25, 2024, 11:09:08 PM »
I confess I had to check out Langston Hughes online. The production of your songs has improved hugely and I found this a really good listen. Keep doing what you do, I'm onboard. :)

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« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2024, 03:39:16 AM »
I have no idea who Langston Hughes is
but its deep in the over grown moss on a river sound
Cool job RJ

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« Reply #4 on: February 11, 2024, 10:46:23 PM »
@RC James

This warm atmosphere, the lyrics and amazing voice of the performer are what I want to highlight in this song!
The slightly different guitar playing and the changing of the rhythm add a warm tone to the performance.

Maya

RC James

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« Reply #5 on: February 12, 2024, 05:26:09 AM »
Thanks very much Maya - pleased you like it.