[shadowfax]

Hi all..just a song, if you take a listen I thank you.

https://soundcloud.com/shadowfax67/give-me-the-love-inside-corrected-bass?si=679ad1774a2e4a63bee822f232004429&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

everywhere I go I stand,
up against the wall,
white flag in my hand,
Don't know where I go from here,
gonna lose my mind,
I can't get past first gear.

Give me the love inside, x4
you can run but you cannot hide,
the love that is in your eye's
please give me the love inside,
give me the love inside.


You invade my night and day,
nothing I can do,
makes you go away,
feelin kinda like some fool,
keep on trying to,
make you think I'm cool.

Give me the love inside, x4
you can run but you cannot hide,
the love that is in your eye's
please give me the love inside,
give me the love inside

[Elvis Nash]

Hey , good stuff, little dark lyrically , Just what I'm in the mood for
Great job !!

[pompeyjazz]

I always look forward to your releases @shadowfax Love that dirty guitar sound that you've got on this one. I like this one, more rocky that some of your stuff but you still retain your strong sense of melody and you put a lot of thought into your productions. The chorus is a great singalong, really catchy. Top marks again Kev 

[Salieri]

I love the chorus too, especially with the harmony which almost sound ethereal, beatiful!
Only thing I could mention is that the chord at 0:30 sounds a bit off. I would expect a g# minor over there.

[shadowfax]

@Salieri
interesting point, Ill give it a look when I get back...ta for listening.

[Skub]

Yo Kevin.

A hooky,earworm from the word go. Your music and vocals allow the listener the luxury of drifting off and basking in the warm glow of your sound.

Quality gear man.   

[Bankie]

I was going to say pretty much what @Salieri said: the chorus harmony is so on-point and fits so well. There's always something in your stuff to make me think "maybe I could do something like that ..."

The dodgy chord on 0:30 is being caused by the bass note, I think.

Maybe not pushing any of your boundaries aside from that harmony, but it's another strong song.

[ChrisPrice]

I agree with @Bankie about that bass note at 0:30, otherwise I love it. Different vocal style but there's a hint of Bryan Adams about this. That's a compliment..I really rate him as a song writer. A great song that's really memorable. I enjoyed this

[shadowfax]

Blimey..need to check it it out now,  can't be putting up rubbish now can I?

[CaliaMoko]

Sounds good to me. I don't have ears discriminating enough to hear pick out one quick bass note (wish I did, though). The song is lovely.

[shadowfax]

@Salieri

Fixed the bass note..thanks for pointing it out mate...

[kevysc]

@shadowfax  Love the dirty guitar, particularly in the intro although I really drives the song along. Another strong love ballad with a catchy chorus and a very excellent clear production.  Nicely done, Kevin

[Salieri]

@Salieri

Fixed the bass note..thanks for pointing it out mate...

Haha, you´re welcome! Still love this song!

[PeteS]

I wish I'd spotted that you fixed the bass note, just spent 15 mins playing along to find it 🤣.  It's great, love the guitar sound.  The chorus is catchy, I just wish it rose a little there to give it more of a lift but overall, great job!