[CorkingCrackBand]

It's great to hear you're back on the bike @rightly
 
  This is really atmospheric and a great blend of inventive catchy music and thoughtful lyric. A song that rewards more on repeat listens - I caught this back when you put it out and it only gets better with repeat listens.  Surprisingly hooky and a great use of rhythm.

Top work,

CCB

[adamfarr]

Hey Rightly - great composition from you again. The title already presages what's coming - a feast of images and mini-scenarios. Sometimes I think you could take more chances melodically but the rhythm and pace of the words have their own music. We already talked about profanity before and here's one that hits hard (American Beauty style). Very original and unique stuff.

[rightly]

It's great to hear you're back on the bike @rightly
 
  This is really atmospheric and a great blend of inventive catchy music and thoughtfu A song that rewards more on repeat listens - I caught this back when you put it out and it only gets better with repeat listens.  Surprisingly hooky and a great use of rhythm.

Top work,

CCB

Yes, this was fun when putting together
I used to enjoy playing it acoustic
The audience wanted to hear easy listening, cowboy stuff
Not my cuppa.
So, I'd already had a drama with the song.
I wasn't sure it'd be any good.
But i like this version now

Thanks for your words of appreciation. 

[rightly]

Hey Rightly - great composition from you again. The title already presages what's coming - a feast of images and mini-scenarios. Sometimes I think you could take more chances melodically but the rhythm and pace of the words have their own music. We already talked about profanity before and here's one that hits hard (American Beauty style). Very original and unique stuff.

Yes, good point Adam
Melodically I'm often short.
I need to address that.
Glad you liked the song

[Bankie]

Not sure what I just listened to there.

Melody: 2/10
Rhythm: 8/10
Weirdness: 10/10

[rightly]

Not sure what I just listened to there.

Melody: 2/10
Rhythm: 8/10
Weirdness: 10/10

Outch

You need to give it a chance!

[Skub]

Hi Rightly. I hope you are well man.

It's great to hear those deep wells of lyricism,executed in your own highly original and inimitable style.

[rightly]

Hi Rightly. I hope you are well man.

It's great to hear those deep wells of lyricism,executed in your own highly original and inimitable style.

Thanks skub. Glad you like the song