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No mind for losing face

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« on: September 28, 2023, 12:57:49 PM »
Oh. Seems I really have to push myself these days to finish a song

I’m quite exhausted

Still, I hope, producing and performing this will not be as arduous as composing.

Feedback would be very welcome.



no mind for losing face

chalk and cheese and
white bread, black coffee
we did not make it through without the grind
  no softer thrill
    to tempest of ill will
    fair enough to say we’ve had our time
I do suppose we could romance the ghost
        reminisce on those days gone by
   but I for one would sooner be gone
who of them can say we did not try?

there is no time, there is no space
 I have no mind for losing face

  no one is at fault,
 blame will not be cast
 regardless of how guilty we might feel
  many futures past
    nothing seems to last
     forever is the notion most unreal
we might be strong enough to carry on
    getting better the same way we got sick
all fates are sealed, this dirty dogged deal
       no-one here gets away with it

there is no time, there is no space
    I have no mind for losing face

   I’ve paid my dues
 I didn’t come to lose
dismissin’ ev’ry lesser victory
   many came and went
 some were heaven sent
an’ possibly meant no harm to me
braver hearts will fly, whereas mine can but try
  to weather come what may, rain or shine
 with heavy head, I put my dreams to bed
   an' begin my free-falling decline

there is no time, there is no space
    I have no mind for losing face
          no mind for losing face

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… rightly



« Last Edit: September 29, 2023, 01:17:30 PM by rightly »
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly

https://soundcloud.com/rightly

rightly

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« Reply #1 on: September 28, 2023, 01:08:25 PM »
Oh, this is just the first draft I expected to develop as I progress with production
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

https://soundcloud.com/2rightly

https://soundcloud.com/rightly