[shadowfax]

Hi peeps..a fairly standard pop type thingy..

https://on.soundcloud.com/X3rmF

A moment lasts forever when I'm with you,
A lifetime spent together in one day,
and the wind of change will see me by your side I know,
it's for you only you night and day,
for as far as I can see i can never let you go,
you are in my destiny can I ever let you know,
you will never walk alone I will always be with you,
in a world that's made of stone you aint got nothing to lose,
here I will be i can never believe the love that i know you can give to me,
never before have I opened this door, the light that I see will belong to me.
for as far as I can see i can never let you go,
you are in my destiny can I ever let you know,
you will never walk alone I will always be with you,
in a world that's made of stone you aint got nothing to lose,
here I will be i can never believe the love that i know you can give to me,
never before have I opened this door, the light that I see will belong to me,
A moment lasts forever when I'm with you,
A lifetime spent together in one day,
and the wind of change will see me by your side I know,
it's for you only you night and day.

[ChrisPrice]

An 80's style power ballad. It's really well crafted and sung. It has an anthemic feel to it which I think would benefit from a live performance. Sounds great to my old ears!!

[Wicked Deeds]

If I may say, I would reduce the overdriven guitar in the intro to allow that lovely synth to cut through.

I'm typing as I listen and note that this really comes into its own when the track hits "here I will be". Thats when the dynamics shine through.  From that I would deduce that the overdriven guitar is distracting a little in places, so that we don't hear the best of this song.  Other than that, you've used a wonderful pallette of sounds to create a big track!

Very enjoyable.

Paul

[moraamarolaloba]

You have a great facility for making beautiful and catchy melodies with an old-fashioned charm that is greatly appreciated today, at least I do.
A good love song and a very good job. @shadowfax

[pompeyjazz]

Hi @shadowfax I didn’t recognise this as a reworked song. It’s synth heaven. Beautifully melodic. Love that acoustic sound that kicks in on v2 and the power guitar. Nice guitar solo too. Another fabulous production 😊

[popitup]

Now that's some pretty ultimate sounding love you got there ! . . . only works in pop songs, at least in my experience (: Really enjoyed the power vocal and harmonies you've  captured here. That guitar solo with tons of effects comes along unexpected, just like the 80's perhaps, but it's all really well done by you, and enjoyed by me !