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« on: August 21, 2023, 08:47:12 PM »
I've never really struggled to write.  Unfortunately something happened to me and I lost the passion that once burned so intensely.  Over the last few weeks, I could sense a creative impulse stirring within me.  Tonight I wrote a haunting melody to these lyrics.  It is called 'Butterfly.' I've posted a quick sketch on my soundcloud page.  this is the third song that I have written in as many days. I'm setting myself a time limit for writing so the sketches are coming together with great speed.  I love this song and am happy to have discovered the desire to write again.

Butterfly

I watched the fluttering of wings, a splash of colour on the breeze,
the south wind rustled through the trees; no more than a month on the wing.

A dance from morning until night, through the meadow to the lake, hardly stopping for a break;
in nature her drama unfolds.

Butterfly, purposeful and free,
we could all observe your flight; change our destiny.

I saw umbrellas rise then fall, cars were racing through the streets.
A crowd of people paused to meet. In the church yard I whispered your name.

No one noticed as they left. They placed their bibles by the door.
Every footstep on the floor, recording the trials that they faced.

Butterfly, purposeful and free,
we could all observe your flight; change our destiny.

Butterfly, purposeful and free.
We could all observe your flight; change our destiny.

Butterfly
Butterfly.

Written by Paul Vasey August 2023


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« Reply #1 on: August 21, 2023, 09:17:57 PM »
Brilliant that the muse has returned @Wicked Deeds We all kind of loose it from time to time and it’s not something that you can conjure back. You write some brilliant songs so keep on keeping on my friend 😊

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« Reply #2 on: August 22, 2023, 01:35:09 AM »
Hi @Wicked Deeds

 I caught this on SC earlier today. It's such a lovely lyrics and your performance really sold it's heartache and cautious (somewhat cynical?) hope.

Irrespective of my lyrical misunderstandings  ;D (never a strong suit of mine) I'm glad you're finding your musical feet again. Music can be a great companion and friend.

Best wishes,

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« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2023, 01:25:15 PM »
reads well. really sweet.
I'm sure you'll do it justice
I look forward to hearing it
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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