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Hi, this is a song I wrote on a bus (warning: disturbing imagery, I guess)

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DSunz

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« on: August 12, 2023, 08:05:46 PM »
Hi, my name is DSunz. I'm into alternative rock, folk, country, punk, pop, hip-hop, all kinds really. This is a song I wrote on a bus once. It's called 'They Say He Got Lost At Sea'. I'd love to hear what people think.  And it's a long one, so I doubly appreciate those who read it.

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« Reply #1 on: August 28, 2023, 05:45:55 PM »
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It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #3 on: August 30, 2023, 09:35:50 PM »
One way or another it’s a devastating lyric. Powerful in its simplicity.

Seriously though if you get it up (Oo- er) I’ll take a look.

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