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Tony John:
Although I am yet to conjure up a title, I have written the lyrics of a song about my hometown.

In the heart of England, a county we'll declare,
South Gloucestershire, a place so fair.
From rolling hills to bustling towns,
A land of stories, both old and renowned.

Oh, South Gloucestershire, where legends are made,
A melody of culture, an ancient serenade.
From the Avon Valley to the Cotswolds' grace,
A proud heritage, woven through time and space.

Nestled in nature's green embrace,
Eternal beauty, in every trace.
The Severn marks its western border,
A stunning backdrop, where dreams take order.

Oh, South Gloucestershire, where legends are made,
A melody of culture, an ancient serenade.
From the Avon Valley to the Cotswolds' grace,
A proud heritage, woven through time and space.

Through the streets of Kingswood, a sense of community,
Warm hearts, friendly faces here for all to see.
Bristol's vibrant spirit, so close at hand,
A hub of creativity, where dreams expand.

From Thornbury's castle to charming Chipping Sodbury,
Sundays in Saltford, where riverside abounds merrily.
Stroll through Yate's alleys, rich history unfolds,
And Frampton Cotterell, a treasure still untold.

Oh, South Gloucestershire, where legends are made,
A melody of culture, an ancient serenade.
From the Avon Valley to the Cotswolds' grace,
A proud heritage, woven through time and space.

From Patchway to Bradley Stoke, thriving communities rise,
Diverse and united, under South Gloucestershire's skies.
Towns and villages, each with their own tale,
A harmonious blend that will never fail.

Oh, South Gloucestershire, where legends are made,
A melody of culture, an ancient serenade.
From the Avon Valley to the Cotswolds' grace,
A proud heritage, woven through time and space.

So let your spirits soar, in South Gloucestershire's embrace,
A place that captures hearts, with its captivating grace.
A symphony of land and people, forever to endure,
South Gloucestershire, a place so pure.

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